Brookelyn Redmond
ENG 231
Professor Lucas
23 October 2014
Comparative Analysis between, “Black Man and White Women in Dark Green Rowboat,”, and “The Hills like White Elephants”
The story “Black Man and White Women in Dark Green Rowboat,” written by Russell Banks, is about a struggling interracial relationship. In this story the white women is very controlling in every part of their relationship. I think the women is very annoying and frustrating because she is all about herself and doesn’t value or care about the black man’s opinion. The black man would like to express his thoughts of what they should do in their situation, the girl will not even give him a chance to say what he feels. After the black man realizes just how self-centered this girl is, he decides to leave her and move on with his life. In the short story written by Ernest P. Hemingway, “The Hills like White Elephants”, it is also between a man and a woman in a bar with a bartender who only speaks Spanish. They are discussing a “procedure” known as abortion that is only recognized when you understand Ernest P. Hemingway’s iceberg theory. “Iceberg theory or theory of omission is when you can describe one thing in a different way such as using pruning a language and avoiding a waste of motion or intensifying the meaning what you are trying to say”. While they were waiting for the train in Barcelona they decide to have a few drinks to pass the time. The disagreement of abortion continues between the man and women until he gives up and just agrees with the woman to stop the argument between them. Finally he gets up and takes the luggage to board the train and the conversation ends. Both short stories require an understanding of the author’s analysis of both a man and woman.
“Black Man and White Woman in Dark Green Rowboat” by Russell Banks has a few similarities with “The Hills like White Elephants” by Ernest Hemingway. Each short story has a male and female that have love for each other and a topic that relates around sex. Both relationships in the short story were going through times of difficulty. The challenge is brought when the subject of abortion was presented in each story. While they both analyze each story to a brief extent it seems that Russell Banks uses for diction in his language the opening of Hemingway story talks about the valley of Ebro and the long White Mountains that are placed in front of the bar. The simplicity of Hemingway’s writing is a significant difference as a reader you notice when trying to better comprehend an author’s writing. An example of description was when he explained “the woman as her long, honey blond hair swung from side to side across her tanned shoulders as she walked down the lane to the beach”. This shows how descriptive Banks is in a short story compared to Hemingway.
In “Black Man and White Woman in Dark Green Rowboat” takes place with a man and a women in a green boat. One thing that caught my attention reading this was that the man’s race was a huge aspect. Reading through this story I realized that no other character was described by race. While the man and women are talking in the green boat the women or the man never clarifies what’s going on in their relationship. The women quoted “I am putting on weight, I told mother”. I didn’t catch on at first what the context clue meant, but further on in the story I realized she was pregnant. Then the women quotes “I am going to do it mother is coming with me”. In my opinion the fact that she said she wanted to “do it” means she wants to set up an appointment to get an abortion. The woman never asks the opinion of the man and does not seem to care what he says. This is one part of his works that I do not agree with at all. I feel like he deserves to tell her his opinion and she should respect him enough to tell let him tell her what he thinks. Because even though she is the one pregnant it is still apart of him and he should have the right to tell her how he feels about the situation at hand. The woman shows how she does not care about his opinion as much as he thinks she should by the way she acts. I think that the man realizes that his opinion is not valued at all in this situation because he says that he wishes he could just leave her out on the island. This appears to be the only option that he has from stopping her on the planned destination. The man is in the position of being completely controlled by the woman in this particular situation. The story has wider suggestions than just the particular situation that is encountered by the man and the woman. The story assists as an example of the results of one dominance. Putting the two main characters in perspective you understand how each author feels one should dominate. While it is usually understood that men are dominant in society. These short stories show how sometimes man will show being inferior as a way of caring and value a woman’s dominance. The difference of dominance can be seen as a reason for an author on how he truly feels society should be addressed.
A person in a relationship has effects along with not being able to communicate their actual feelings. The dominant character aspect of the story has a connection to Hemingway’s “The Hills like White Elephants”. In Banks story the dominant person in the relationship is the woman whereas the American man is the dominant figure in Hemingway’s story. I think personally the most important thing in a relationship is communication and talking to each other about anything. Everyone has their own opinions on things and they should be able to express how they feel. When you are in a relationship you can’t be selfish like the woman was in “Black Man and White Woman in Dark Green Rowboat” because when you care and love someone enough you value and care about what they have to say. She was just all about what she wanted to do and didn’t care to know what the black man thought. This was big part of what I got out of that story and how important it is to listen to others opinions because you never know when you might learn something for yourself.
“The Hills like White Elephants” and “Black Man and White Woman in Dark Green Rowboat”, have many differences and only a few similarities. Comparing and contrasting these two stories as a reader you can see how these two Americans authors are different in many ways. With the differences presented such as description and diction they also have similarities. The two authors write short stories on a man and woman dealing with abortion and how they feel on the topic. This sexual topic is the main reason for why these two short stories are similar. American authors such as Banks and Hemingway use topics that may interest readers to understand their works. Comparing and contrasting these two works I was able to understand the differences that the two authors could have with a similar topic but also the similarities.
Banks, Russell, “Black Man and White Woman in Dark Green Rowboat”, The Story and Its Writers, Compact 9th ed. Ann Charters. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2014. 62-67. Print.
Hemingway, Ernest, “Hills Like White Elephants”, The Story and Its Writers, Compact 9th ed. Ann Charters. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2014. 416-419. Print.
“Iceberg Theroy.” Wikipedia.com. N.p., n.d. Web. 28 Oct. 2014.